Hi Everyone! 🙂
I wrote my first ever comedy sketch script for YouTuber TomSka as he asked his fans to write a one page featuring himself, Eddie and Elliot. He asked this last month (November 2016).
Comedy Sketch: Cereal Problems
By Savan Gandecha
INTRO: Eddie and Tom are both sitting down on the sofa staring at two empty bowls with spoons and milk on the table. Eddie reaches out for the cereal box in front of him. Tom also reaches out for the same box. Eddie grabs it and sees that it’s empty…
Puzzled by this…Eddie then asks Tom:
EDDIE: So, can you explain why this box of cereal is empty?
TOM: I dunno why it’s empty, I only got this yesterday.
EDDIE: How many times have I told you not to eat it straight away?
TOM: Sorry, it was so tempting to get these Mine Turtles
*Pans to Mine Turtles and Tom pressing Mine Turtle (sound comes out of the toy) *
Eddie looks in disbelief and shakes his head and sighs.
EDDIE: But also eating the whole box too?!
TOM: Yeah, it’s so delicious and I love these Mine Turtles *pans again to Mine Turtles*
EDDIE: Never mind, how are you going to explain to Elliot again why his favourite cereal is gone?
TOM: We could say that it was a time traveller who discovered that they discontinued this particular cereal and can only find them in this very place in the whole world.
EDDIE: What without taking the box too?
Tom throws box in bin and jumps into bin to crush it.
EDDIE: Oh that’ll work lovely Tom!
Elliot then walks into the office with new boxes of cereal.
ELLIOT: Hey guys, got some new boxes of cereal…
Elliot looks at both Tom, Eddie, then the mine turtles.
ELLIOT: So that pesky time traveller has come again has he?
BOTH TOM & EDDIE: Yeah, boy that pesky time traveller has outwitted us again!
I doubt it’ll be picked still because he had over 500 scripts sent in 24 hours and he has already filmed two of three. I don’t know yet if he will film others. But will post a new blog post if he does.
I will re-film this script with some changes to it and hope to film sometime in 2017. Hopefully in January but we will see.
Let me know in the comments below what you thought of this script.
Take care guys!